Sunday, May 16, 2010

WIP


So I got rid of the dome, and made some furniture for the top, like an outside patio. Lemme know what you think.

2 comments:

  1. -The door looks made of metal and also is too flat.

    -The wood looks like it has grunge.

    -The square plank needs more deformation, less geometric

    -Overall is going good

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  2. Amoon made some good points. I's also like to see the wood a bit lighter, right now the wood looks extremely dark, especially against those light cliffs (been thinking this for awhile, especially after the presentation)

    Also the sail/cloth on top needs some work. It feels like it is getting blown around in the wind. Maybe have it sagging a tiny bit and closer to the frame.

    Good additions! Keep going!

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