Amoon made some good points. I's also like to see the wood a bit lighter, right now the wood looks extremely dark, especially against those light cliffs (been thinking this for awhile, especially after the presentation)
Also the sail/cloth on top needs some work. It feels like it is getting blown around in the wind. Maybe have it sagging a tiny bit and closer to the frame.
-The door looks made of metal and also is too flat.
ReplyDelete-The wood looks like it has grunge.
-The square plank needs more deformation, less geometric
-Overall is going good
Amoon made some good points. I's also like to see the wood a bit lighter, right now the wood looks extremely dark, especially against those light cliffs (been thinking this for awhile, especially after the presentation)
ReplyDeleteAlso the sail/cloth on top needs some work. It feels like it is getting blown around in the wind. Maybe have it sagging a tiny bit and closer to the frame.
Good additions! Keep going!